In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this case?
What can be done about this problem?
Recently, staving is one of the concern problems in the world even agricultural development. In this paper, I will examine the reasons why starving happens and how we can figure it out.
In the one hand, there are some causes of starvation. Firstly, many people are still in lower status economic social. Inasmuch as people want to get some food, they must allocate their finances for purchasing. For instance, if people desire a beverage for lunch, they prepare some ingredients like rice, egg, and so on, which is a needed budget. As a consequence, they disable to grab some food while did not have enough money. Secondly, starving likely occurs because there is climate change. Seeing that, it can reduce food production. For example, the weather will change, affecting the crop unpredictably. Therefore, scarcity of stock harvest takes place, making people suffer.
Nevertheless, to deal with this, first of all, the government must create a policy to stand for lower society. It is because they have great authority to manage the country's finance. For example, the Ministry of Finance can allocate some subsidies. Accordingly, many people will have the income to purchase their household needs properly. Secondly, try to live with zero waste. It is due to, this lifestyle potentially decreasing trash. For the model, people should bring their own shopping bags, and minimize online shopping to bring down bubble wrap trash. As a result, balance in the human ecosystem will be maintained.
On the whole, there are some causes of starvation and the solution to tackle this problem is a collaboration between the government and society. I hope in the future many young people learn about how important to care for the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, as a result, first of all, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16197183099 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68906216852 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612676056338 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.549913474 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.8095238095 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5238095238 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61904761905 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182995717284 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494224713859 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447283147763 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128223591896 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452902372444 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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