spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
some people are in favor of the power of verbal communication more than writing in one. However, I believed that both have their own benefit.
In some cases, oral speech transfers information and opinion more effectively. The weight of speech is not only influenced by containing the information but also the attitude, emotion and enthusiasm of the speaker. moreover, face-to-face communication can deliver inspirational speeches by using their own features and the power to change mindsets. For instance, Abraham Lincoln and Michelle Obama whose power can alternate people's moods and soothe their pain.
On the other hand, writing is batter than verbal communication. In case of invitation or important cases, written communication is more formal than the verbal one. For working circumstances, the need to keep the information, the contract that is legally binding. moreover, in special cases when you can pour out, a card or letters and help you. at Christmas, birthdays a card or letters with a handwritten usually means much more than to give wish on the tip of one's tongue.
In conclusion, verbal communication and written one are equally necessary for people. both have their own function, but which situation when one of them is more important than the other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95949767525 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6837991571 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.3846153846 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6923076923 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239281027176 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086274940422 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834095641867 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156483502396 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398615270354 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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