Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is an idea that people who communicate by speaking is more influential than communicate by writing. I partly agree with this view and I will explain why in this essay.
Firstly, spoken communication conveys ideas effectively because it involves body language and reaction. For example, when you communicate face to face with someone, you can see their reaction, hear their voice or their tone which help you understand what they want to imply. Therefore, you can also predict their personality through their behaviors, their appearance or their style. Secondly, a meeting face to face involves body language also so it can attract everyone’s attention and the ideas can be exchanged very well.
On the other hand, communication by writing is also important for people who works in law or in business. For instance, in the courts, people must provide evidence such as documents, emails, letters, etc. to enhance their opinion. In the business, written communication helps people restore documents, statistics or contract which is important for work.
In conclusion, it’s difficult to know what more influential communicate. Spoken communication conveys effectively but written communication is more useful in law and business.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 192.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.484375 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00765354017 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598958333333 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0026784689 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.75 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27837666146 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108153660094 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107939737215 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19638993901 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100085761773 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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