The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the Internet and what solutions can you suggest?
It is true that the internet has changed the way information is conveyed and absorbed. Several serious problems such as the existence of high-tech criminal have resulted from this tendency and they should be tackled by a number effective solutions like raise individual awareness of cyber security.
In the modern world, people’s personal data can easily be attacked with few clicks. For example, hacker imitate well-known banks, send people a fake email and request them give their private information on the “bank website”. If people do this, they will leak their private information to high-tech criminal. This means, cyber criminal can easily access to people’s social account or even their internet banking account in order to scam their friend on social media account and steal their money from e-bank.
Since such issue is serious, the individual should immediately take steps to address this problem. Firstly, they can improve their awareness of cyber security. In other words, individuals should not click any unverified links and alert to reply email requesting them update their information from bank, even well-known bank. Secondly, people should turn on two-factor authentication function for their social account. This mean, if people want to log in their account, they will not only type their password but also type OTP code sent to their phone. This method can prevent high-tech criminal from attacking people’s social account effectively.
In conclusion, the way information is conveyed and absorbed brings various negative problems such as the existence of cybercriminal and appropriate step need to be taken to tackle these problems is improve individual awareness of cyber security.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 199, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...to be taken to tackle these problems is improve individual awareness of cyber security....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48679245283 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68872624918 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57358490566 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1598521551 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.846153846 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131075610188 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571375541681 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494221186833 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108345023237 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500911989125 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.