spoken communication is popular than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree
There is currently a contentious argument over the power of spoken communication and written communication. I totally disagree with this opinion and will explain it in the essay below.
There are many compelling reasons as to why I don’t believe that spoken communication surpasses written one. The first justification is that written communication is the product of its time which helps the later generation reflecting themselves as well as understanding their ancestor’s effort of making peace or great success for the country. That is the greatest mitigation to foster one country’s educated workforce together with the economical growth to thrive in its prime time. Secondly, it is out in the open that such chronicles will be there for good so that the masses can easily reread and sleep on them as a way to raise their own awareness of the emerging status of society and human beings. Meanwhile, the spoken form of communication is once produced, it hardly gives people enough time to memorize or evaluate things.
Although written communication has multiple benefits as are mentioned, it would be imprudent if we ignored the merits of spoken communication. In this day and age, fewer people are inclined to reading habit in comparison to the past. To illustrate, only 7% of Vietnamese read about 20 books in a total year. The same pattern is also seen in a lot of Southeast Asia such as Cambodia, Laos,...It is proven that nowadays people are in the offing to hear and transfer the message through media. In this case, the one who takes advantage of spoken communication seems to have the dominant position.
In conclusion, I believe that the written communication is much weightier than spoken due to its impact on society accompanied by the valuable meaning transferred to the audience. It is evident that the later generation will benefit from the quintessence of the past chronicle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11182108626 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01638054341 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581469648562 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0638367997 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.285714286 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245798012771 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851740876679 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085127753948 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157258576792 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245172818341 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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