Students should pay the full cost for their own study, because university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people argue that college attendees have to take responsibility for their tuition fee, because only them derive benefit from higher education and society has no advantages at all. From my perspective, I strongly disapprove of this argument and the reasons will be elaborated on this essay.
Firstly, there are numerous specialized jobs lacking them that could bring the world to the brink of extinction such as doctor, researcher, lawyer who need long-term education. For instance, a doctor needs around 10 years of studying and passing numerous stressful examinations to get a practicing certificate. This fact seems impossible for learners to pay their full tuition cost if their family cannot support the financial problems, which prevents low-income students from pursuing highly qualifìed jobs and makes the gap between rich and poor bigger. Therefore, the government should have appropriate policies such as scholarships or loans with low rates to support talented students, especially those from poor families.
Secondly, tertiary education raises not only academic knowledge but also awareness of attendees. To be more specific, all Vietnamese students have to enroll in “The foundation of Law in Vietnam” course so learners have a basic knowledge about the legislation, which could help reduce the proportion of crime. Beside that, people could easily get well paid jobs with higher degrees in today's world. This means the investment of the government poured into education will be returned by tax income of employees.
For the reasons mentioned above, I believe that students should be helped with financial aid while studying at university as bringing the opportunity of receiving equal higher education for all classes in society and remaining the future income for the government via tax.
- Students should pay the full cost for their own study because university education benefits individuals rather than society To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Students should pay the full cost for their own study because university education benefits individuals rather than society To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ture income for the government via tax.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53214285714 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81041929837 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653571428571 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.3178857534 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.818181818 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179868740881 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578322378073 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632665821527 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111117567176 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511333235274 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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