Studies suggest that children spend more time watching TV than they did in the past and they spend less time in doing active or creative things.
What are the causes and what methods can be used to solve the problem?
It is true that, nowadays, children would rather choose watching TV as a leisure activity than playing outside or doing creative things. While there are many various reasons for this problem, there are also many measures that could be taken to tackle this issue.
There are two primary causes that make children spend more time at home and watch TV. Firstly, in modern life, parents are too busy to play or educate their kids, and as result, TV programs would be both educational and entertaining for children. Secondly, the increasing of traffic makes streets become too dangerous to play around. To protect their kids from crowded roads with vehicles, adults would disallow their youngsters to go outside with friends, so the only way that children could have fun is watching movies or cartoons on television.
There are several methods that parents could take to solve the problems described above. The first measure is that allow their kids to participate some centers for children, which have outside activities such as camping, running, playing sports or swimming. Secondly, parents can sometimes bring their kids to playgrounds in malls or supermarkets where they can have fun and play with their friends. Finally, adults should find time to play with their youngsters and encourage them to do creative things at home, including painting, making crafts, playing musical instruments or writing poems.
In conclusion, some reasons why children are spending more time watching TV can be identified, and some simple solutions should be taken to encourage them to do more active activities and creative things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to watch'.
Suggestion: to watch
... nowadays, children would rather choose watching TV as a leisure activity than playing o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23846153846 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50720854229 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588461538462 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7097156968 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.818181818 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27385486734 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109597560829 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103807414472 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186252612655 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822967656134 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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