In these days, we see that the children spent their time to watch TV without do any thing that improve their mind so, this is a dangerous thing. Now I will discus this problem.
Firstly, now, in modern life parents busy in work so they do not have enough time to see their children or to play with them. So, the children will go and watch television to enjoy. Secondly, now, our roads crowded that there are lot of cars. So, it is not safety for children this is why parents do not allow their children to go out and play outside. For example, when I was child my mother used to allow me to go and play near our home with the children of my area but now she does not acquiesce my little sister to play on the street because of the large number of cars. Also, in these days we live in a crisis where there is a virus spread in all countries it is called "Covid 19" or "Corona". So, the government does not allow to go out side and play. So all children have no other solution than watching TV to have fun.
We can solve this trouble by, parents must make time to play with their children to educate and play with them so in this way, we will be able to keep children away from watching TV or reduce that, and compensate them by playing with parents, for example, by improving their talent for drawing, music, writing, and other thing that educate them
In conclusion, there are lot of reason to make children watch TV. In my opinion, the best solution is in the hands of parents, where they can take care of their children and keep them away from excessive TV viewing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: anything
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Line 2, column 753, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'going', 'gonna'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: going; gonna
...pos;. So, the government does not allow to go out side and play. So all children have...
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Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
...So, the government does not allow to go out side and play. So all children have no other...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ep them away from excessive TV viewing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30333333333 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2912272306 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486666666667 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.0671769839 49.4020404114 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 107.583333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169564465978 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067944341786 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528529541738 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125008272596 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226535078722 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.96 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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