Success is often measured by wealth and material belongings in modern times. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What, in your opinion, makes a person successful in life?
Nowadays some people believe that to be successful individuals must have wealth and material belongings. I partially concur with this issue in certain respects, however, my viewpoint, some reasons can be derived from this notion and I will explicate in the ensuing paragraph.
First, in my viewpoint, to be successful is not only ranked by prosperity but also by remarkable education achievement since currently many people find it hard to complete. Being accepted for a master degree by Gates Cambridge Scholarship is such a great success because of the acceptance rate only 1% for students. Moreover, this can be rated by being placed in the highest position of today’s occupation. This is based on how people strive for numerous failures to gain more income and connection. Becoming a CEO, for instance, which is the best result they have in professional life after facing a lot of struggles and efforts.
Looking at the prominent causes, the success could be reached by hard work and discipline. This is based on plenteous experiences which have been passed by consistency in order to reach a goal. Jack Ma, a Chinese Billionaire, experienced bad circumstances before successfully building Alibaba and AliExpress. In addition, family support or surroundings can be seen as another remarkable factor. For instance, a supportive family can encourage one to struggle for what they have been doing in their life because family is one of the societal elements which more likely set high aspirations, to push obstacles and accomplish amazing things in ones’ life.
Overall, the issue of successful measurement not only rating by wealth but also by greater education accomplishment and respected position at work. Meanwhile, success can be gained by perseverance and support from the closest relatives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, while, for instance, in addition, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31707317073 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01058200782 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606271777003 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5627182915 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172337545145 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634056531563 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632483333281 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120522624736 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538314736917 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.