Success is often measured by wealth and material belongings in modern times. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What, in your opinion, makes a person successful in life?
Nowadays some people believe that to be successful individuals must have wealth and material belongings. I partially concur with this issue in certain respects, however, my viewpoint, some reasons can be derived from this notion and I will explicate in the ensuing paragraph.
First, in my viewpoint, measuring success by prosperity might affect how some people endeavour to be wealthy instantaneously, such as financial fraud requiring less than 1 decade to get millions dollars by scamming. As a result, this would lead them to be in financial crime and have potential to be sentenced heavily for years. Moreover, this may lead to a condition where individuals feel unsatisfied with their belongings because of greedy behaviour. Consequently, those might feel envy with others having more money and desperately try to be the richest at all time.
Looking at the prominent causes, the success could be reached by hard work and discipline. This is based on plenteous experiences which have been passed by consistency in order to reach a goal. Jack Ma, a Chinese Billionaire, experienced bad circumstances before successfully building Alibaba and AliExpress. In addition, family support or surroundings can be seen as another remarkable factor. For instance, a supportive family can encourage one to struggle for what they have been doing in their life because family is one of the societal elements which more likely set high aspirations, to push obstacles and accomplish amazing things in ones’ life.
Overall, the issue of wealth as a successful measurement can provoke assist people to get involved in an instant way to be rich and feel mentally unsatisfied with their prosperity. Meanwhile, success can be gained by perseverance and support from the closest relatives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an instant way" with adverb for "instant"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3487544484 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04397176587 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626334519573 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0803884769 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.615384615 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16963293032 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629388342346 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605281833492 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110637206099 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390531670406 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.