Task 2
ln most of the societies, the role of mother ond father differs. What
are the causes of this difference? What will be the parental roles in
future?
In many countries, father and mother play different roles in the family. This is mainly due to gender discrimination showed in the past and in the upcoming days, parents would share their responsibilities to run the family without any financial issues.
To begin with, the prime reason for the difference in parental roles is gender disparity followed by old generation people. For instance, in ancient days, mothers were not allowed to earn for their families, instead they did household chores like cooking, cleaning and taking care of their children. However, men did all outside tasks such as shopping , going for job and they were the breadwinners. This practice is still continued in certain societies because of the influence of forefathers.
In future, this practice would not exist as the rising cost of living would demand both of them to earn money. For example, families have variety of expenses like rent, food, children's education and festivals. Inorder to meet them, they would share their financial and household responsibilities equally. Males need to help women in domestic activities and women have to find a job for earning wages and so they can lead a joyful life without financial burden. Any imbalance in this sharing may cause conflicts between them.
In conclusion, variation in the roles of men and women in a family in some communities is due to the partiality showed on genders by their ancestors. But, in future, they would definitely share and exchange tasks to avoid financial crisis.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14516129032 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76637164015 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584677419355 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6050405557 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1538461538 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146046385146 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060774045296 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745483628593 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100868246209 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058163319474 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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