In recent years, people tend to consume goods like clothes, cars and other items from famous brands. There are a number of reasons for this trend, which is having a significant impact on individuals.
There are two important reasons why more and more people want to buy famous products. Firstly, people want their products to be ensured in terms of quality. The more prevalent brands are, the better their quality is. People suppose that these goods are still being in the competitive market for years as they are trusted by consumers. For example, goods manufactured by Apple are preferable to other gadgets brands, which are less prevalent. Secondly, the possession of these famous products is also a way to show off their wealth, style and social class as well. If they use ordinary goods, no one will recognize them.
However, this tendency could have negative consequences in terms of benefits for individuals. Some brands might use marketing strategies to manipulate consumers. For example, using digital marketing makes people believe in the quality of products without thoroughly checking. Another negative factor is that consumers will skip other brands despite the fact that they are high-quality goods but not endorsed by a great number of celebrities. This leads to an unwanted monopoly of some brands in the market, which costs consumers a great deal of money.
In conclusion, this consumerism is a result of people’s need to have high-quality products and demonstrate on their own. As it deprives consumers of having a look at others, this trend is largely negative.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...others, this trend is largely negative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15503875969 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70946589873 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577519379845 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2408241432 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.125 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208477357355 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701743281988 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891490128692 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118665087268 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725396899627 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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