Task 2: Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments
rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?
Together with expansion of scientific researches on various areas recently, not only governments but also private corporations also conduct a number of their own researches without control of relevant officials may cause some serious matters for society. This fear makes me have to strongly support for the statement that government would be the only one who carry out and public such kinds of latest discoveries and theories.
some personal firms argue that they also have rights to invest and implement experiment however there has hidden worries that community should be aware of. Variety of cosmetic companies implement experiments on herbal plants and seek for an element to consolidate as a compound contribute to maintain the beauty and anti-aging in women. Their goal is to prioritize their profit maximally. however the real effects of those plants could not be proven but them, leading to subsequence for health and beauty of users.
On the other hand, giving responsibility of science studying for government can be trustworthy and reliable. First of all, government represents and serve for inhabitants as a whole by using tax from them so all public duties from officials for benefits of them. The national departments probably assign to Professors of national University or call their contribution of general developments. The results of research will be used widely and non profit in either corporations or individuals.
In addition, to researches are discovered by government would have to comply a set of regulations to guarantee the scope, objectivities and methods using properly and concisely. For example, experiments relates on gene or human body should obey ethnical perspectives strictly to avoid any rejection from community.
To conclude, science research is extremely crucial for humans and it should be the role of government to verify information accurately.
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Comments
Result better than expected.
Result better than expected. Is it trustworthy?
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 392, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...one who carry out and public such kinds of latest discoveries and theories. some...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...test discoveries and theories. some personal firms argue that they also hav...
^^^^
Line 11, column 390, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...s to prioritize their profit maximally. however the real effects of those plants could ...
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 390, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: however,
...s to prioritize their profit maximally. however the real effects of those plants could ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, for example, in addition, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55782312925 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00624090543 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632653061224 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6582691796 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.692307692 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135859713258 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462285898724 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416040367711 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801281507135 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434720742545 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.