Task 2: Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments
rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?
Accompanying with the unstoppable expansion of scientific researches on various fields recently, not only governments but also self-controlled entrepreneurs also have been conducting a number of their own researches without control of relevant officials that may cause some serious matters for society. This interest (or contemporary situation)affects me have to strongly support for the statement that government would be the only entrusted center that may carry out, verify, and publish such kinds of latest discoveries and academic theories.
some personal (or individual) firms argue that they also have rights to invest and implement experiments, however there are hidden worries that the community should be aware of. Variety of cosmetic companies implement experiments on herbal plants and seek for an element to consolidate as a compound contribute to maintain the beauty and anti-aging treatment for women. Their goal is to prioritize their profit ultimately or “ as beneficial as they desire”. however, the real effects of those plants could not be proven but them, leading to subsequence for health and beauty of users.
On the other hand, giving responsibility of studying science to government can be trustworthy and reliable. First of all, the government represents and serves for inhabitants as a whole by using tax from them so that all public duties for benefits can be provided. The national departments probably have rights to assign to professors from national universities or call their contributions of general developments. The results of research will be applied widely and non-profitably in either corporations or individuals.
In addition, science-related researches are discovered by government would have to comply a set of regulations to guarantee the scope, objectivities and methods using properly and concisely. For example, experiments relates to gene or human body should obey ethnical perspectives strictly to avoid any rejections from community.
To conclude, science research is extremely crucial for the development of human-being and consequently, the management of science and technology should be the role of government to verify information and contents accurately.
- People living in large cities face several problems. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller towns? 89
- The only way to improve road safety is to give much stricter punishmentson driving offenses. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 11
- Today large shopping centers and supermarkets are more common than small local shops. Is this a negative or positive development? 89
- Children should never be educated at home by their parents. Do you agree or disagree?Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. 78
- The tradition that the family gets together to eat meals is disappearing.What are the reasons? What are the impacts? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 499, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...rry out, verify, and publish such kinds of latest discoveries and academic theories. ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...overies and academic theories. some personal or individual firms argue that...
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Line 11, column 467, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...os; as beneficial as they desire'. however, the real effects of those plants could...
^^^^^^^
Line 23, column 145, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the management of science and technology should be the role of government to veri...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, so, for example, in addition, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1924.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8303030303 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31648635251 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615151515152 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.7667212402 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.0 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3846153846 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138141323824 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467526790224 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380091416551 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788853201871 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373082744501 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.83 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.67 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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