Task 2: The tradition that the family gets together to eat meals is disappearing.
What are the reasons? What are the impacts?
tradition meal is not only a culture of a nation but also a frequent practise in each family. However, because of rapid growth of modern society, this custom is likely gone way. there are several root causes as well as effects to young generation who suffers from this lost.
In some countries, like Asia particularly, dinner together plays an crucial role in a family after a hard working day back. Each member shares separately stories and shows their care to others warmly. Nonetheless, while the world keeps running, human is either to work unstoppably to catch the fast speed of development. they reckon that any terminations will also probably get them away of life rotation. Their busyness isolates them from family engagement. Furthermore, diversity of entertainment activities and smart technology such as smart phones and tablets draw people attraction to online social networks where they are freely in virtual living without taking care to their families.
Obviously, the longer the traditional practices from our ancients are absented, the more values the younger generation like us would have lost. there has no longer chance for the seniors educate their children how to live ethically as well as share to them how did ancients live in the past, how much the misery they had been suffering during the war. The youth will never acknowledge those precious values when they are better live in a peaceful world, leading to non respect what they have. Lack of trained behaviours and attitudes would cause them more wilful and having impolite manners seriously to the surrounding.
Despite of having realised the meaning of traditional meals, this disappearance would also remain over negative effects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Tradition
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...ociety, this custom is likely gone way. there are several root causes as well as effe...
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...sia particularly, dinner together plays an crucial role in a family after a hard w...
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Suggestion:
...ach member shares separately stories and shows their care to others warmly. Nonet...
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...to catch the fast speed of development. they reckon that any terminations will also ...
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... traditional practices from our ancients are absented, the more values the younge...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, nonetheless, so, well, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31407942238 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62797039829 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675090252708 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4871088845 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.142857143 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0880900011497 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0281510851555 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314458624679 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0462253850136 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00738635197931 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.