As technological innovation brings about rapid change retraining becomes a lifelong necessity. Therefore, industry should be take responsibility for the education, training and retraining of their workers. To what extent do you agree to this idea.
It is an incontrovertible fact that education has become a lifelong process for most people. In this era people are see new innovations everyday and they should be trained properly to extract desired benefits from it. Few masses given that it is the major duty of industry take the education and training to employees. This essay agrees to some extent with this notion and rendered the viewpoints in the upcoming paragraphs.
To embark with there are plethora of reasons why industry should not take the responsibility for education and training of your workers. Firstly, many of employees are already trained and educated in their tertiary and vocational education institutes. They have only need to update with the new technical gadgets. Secondly, it is the duty of worker to give knowledge about technology and keep themselves abreast with it.
To continue with my points, companies are spending millions on training their employees who are fresh graduate unemployable. As well as, the industry give education them before starting the jobs. Industries are often argued that it should the duty of government to increase employability of fresh graduates and to do some changes in the education system.
However, the companies have myriad of skills which they can teach your future employees. Also, if they will take the education and training to workers it will help produce their own training cost.
In conclusion, I tend out to say that it is equal responsibility of industries and individuals to take the education and training related to the technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...this era people are see new innovations everyday and they should be trained properly to ...
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Line 5, column 268, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'needed'.
Suggestion: needed
...al education institutes. They have only need to update with the new technical gadget...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22924901186 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.883501476 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561264822134 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.3377402288 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.5 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240880890533 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815091543633 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528269886618 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130980102529 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511301109685 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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