Technology has affected people in mostly negative ways. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people assert that technology brings mostly negative effects to humans. I disagree because it also affects individuals in many positive ways.
It is understandable why people think that technology mostly has detrimental impacts on the users. One reason is the rising problem of social isolation amongst those who are obsessed with their technology gadgets. This happens due to the lack of contact with other people in normal daily living at home or workplaces. A clear example is that, since the introduction of portable music devices and headphones, many teenagers tend to skip any face-to-face meeting with family members or friends. Another reason is that health problems are now occurring more often. Some statistics has shown that both physical and metal issues such as short-sightedness, obesity, stress and depression are associated with the use of technology.
However, I believe there are great influences on people that technology delivers. One reason to support my standpoint on this matter is that the advent of technology has completely changed the attitude of students towards their study. In the past, people would have to borrow books from the library and spend time scanning for information. It is not the case in modern days because students are now able to access a sizable pool of knowledge with just a few clicks. With this convenience, studying has never been more enjoyable and pleasure. Furthermore, technology allows individuals to speak their views in politics or any matters anonymously. This eliminate the anxious feeling when sharing personal opinions to other peers.
In sum, I conclude that technology would affect the users in many positive ways, not just negative ones. A correct and balance use of these high-tech devices would improve daily life and minimize the detriments at the same time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30479452055 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81063002095 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616438356164 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2467576173 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1176470588 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1764705882 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52941176471 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19722999002 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664275700348 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807803577557 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151421603799 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104269020043 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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