Televised talent shows have become popular in many societies today. Are these shows a good method of finding talented people, or are they just entertainment.
In many countries, televised talent shows are being produced more and more and people have been attracted to these TV shows, day after day. These kinds of TV shows have two major aspects like many other businesses. The first one is entertaining aspect and the second one is sponsoring and money and talented people are discovered by these two.
The entertainment is what viewers expect from a TV program, in this way, talent shows could make the majority of viewers satisfied while they also have found many talented people that they are among celebrities throughout the world. For example, Beyoncé and Britney Spears had come from talent shows before they become famous.
As a matter of fact, money plays the main role in every business and this is a great reason to invest in talent shows because of benefit and brand promotion. For example, a famous talent show has 2 billion viewers and it uses talented people to get more viewers and rise its population between its viewers. Certainly, it is the most reliable place to promote and spend money.
As I said above, to me, both entertainment and money serve as a valuable purpose to find talented people who could not demonstrate their abilities, capabilities and gifts to others and perhaps this TV shows help them to become a hero or a successful person in their life.
- Televised talent shows have become popular in many societies today. Are these shows a good method of finding talented people, or are they just entertainment. 56
- Televised talent shows have become popular in many societies today. Are these shows a good method of finding talented people, or are they just entertainment. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[3]
Message: You should probably use 'show'.
Suggestion: show
...shows, day after day. These kinds of TV shows have two major aspects like many other ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, while, for example, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86842105263 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51128569927 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592105263158 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.5411152333 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.333333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34503489275 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144770151321 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682667727367 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205913311912 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639277527806 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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