Theme:Nowadays distance-learning programs have gained popularity but some people argue that online courses can never be taken as good as those taken at a college or university in person.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
E-learning has become prominent among all countries over the last a few years.However,some says that it cannot be fruitful as every child needs special attention which technologies cannot provide.I completely agree with this statement and try to explain my view in following paragraphs.
It is true that distance-learning programs provide children an opportunity to do lessons at any time they prefer.Besides,it may help to save both money and time for students,as they do not have to wait taxies and pay them.In spite of that,traditional learning is much more plausible because students can learn every aspect of the subjects clearly and in detail according to their mental abilities.For example,once a pupil have a disability to comprehend the task,then he will be paid special attention by tutor.
Furthermore,pupils can easily develop their communication skills by being in touch with their classmates or coursemates.Moreover,traditional education system encourages higher level of competitivenes among students.For instance,when one of the students achieves a breakthrough or completes the task better than others,other pupils endauvor to do the assignments perfectly in an attempt to be the best.In addition,you do not miss the lessons compared to the online learning system,as you will not have any problem related to the network.
All in all,distance learning programs can hardly provide the same effect as conventional courses because students cannot profit from developing interpersonal skills or getting feedback instantly during the class hours.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, may, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, in my view, in spite of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74468085106 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.85875568974 2.80592935109 138% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668085106383 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.2975951904 286% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.145530148 49.4020404114 280% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 337.5 106.682146367 316% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.75 20.7667163134 283% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 32.75 7.06120827912 464% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167928708342 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917063725783 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346571835642 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917063725783 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346571835642 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.0 13.0946893788 267% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 4.15 50.2224549098 8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 11.3001002004 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.9 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.55 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.1190380762 249% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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