There are an increasing number of people who do not know their neighbours. What causes this situation? How to solve it?
In the current contemporary society , the development of technologies and the momentous effect of the covid 19 pandemic have minimized the contract between individuals. Hence, an increasing number of inhabitants tend to be more introverted and less communicate with the surrounding neighbours. The further paragraph will discuss and give the opinion.
On the one hand , modern technologies have made people tend to the start a conservation through visual platforms, rather than redirect contact. Thus , although living in a high density era, a majority of citizens do not recognize or contact with their neighbours. Futhermore, severals rules and accessories during the fight against the current epidemic have minimized the number of conservation between inhabitants.
Based on the current problem , although the pandemic have a substantial effect on the contact between inhabitants , there are still several problems that can solve the issue above. For instance, the apartment representative can eliminate some laws when the society controled the epidemic or encourage citizens set up online meeting to increase tcontacts between owners. As a result, any person can make a plethora of breakthough in social contact and recognize their neighbours.
In conclusion, it is hard for people to be confident and having a open mind when starting a conservation with neighbours in the current world situation . Nevertheless , each inhabitant should learn and be more social , otherwise people in the near future will be insensivity and scared of the outside environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, nevertheless, so, still, thus, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61016949153 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16372206881 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60593220339 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7833240629 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.363636364 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4545454545 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125699586233 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447481164541 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365262450947 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724891438404 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0129405870759 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.