There are social, medical, and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones.
What forms do they take?
Do you agree the problems of mobile phones outweigh the benefits?
These days, with the development of technology and modern devices, many mobile phones have been produced to meet the demand for work and study. Some folks believe that there are numerous disadvantages of mobile phones such as social, medical and technical problems and the drawbacks of itself was outweigh the benefits one.
In detail, some people argue that the problems of mobile phones are significant. Firstly, as the result of spending too much time on mobile phones, people might become addictive to social media and modern devices and lead to various eyes diseases such as short-sighted and astigmatism. For instance, nowadays more and more teenagers have to wear glasses because of their bad habits in spending time on modern devices. Secondly, social problems can associate with the use of mobile phones because many people may suffer from losing important details or even exposing private information saving in their mobile phones. It can be attributed to the lost of their phone or their unsecured protection. Another striking issue is resulted from the technical problems when their phones are broken or faulty.
On the other hand, despite its weakness, people can benefit a lot when they are using mobile phone. They can easily access to information without searching for it for hours in the library or other public places. Moreover, it is more convenient to relax themselves with various entertainment methods such as listening to music, reading e-books or chatting with friends.
In conclusion I suppose that there are many limitations in the use of mobile phones but it is not true to think that there are more problems than the benefits of using mobile phone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 298, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outweighed'.
Suggestion: outweighed
...roblems and the drawbacks of itself was outweigh the benefits one. In detail, some pe...
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Line 4, column 183, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...han the benefits of using mobile phone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1496350365 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57210990705 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547445255474 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1962575539 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.583333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38836445018 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155007245201 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11634184129 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264457787692 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769764762341 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.