There are social, medical, and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones.
What forms do they take?
Do you agree the problems of mobile phones outweigh the benefits?
These days, with the development of technology and modern devices, many mobile phones have been produced to meet the demand for work and study. Some folks believe that there are numerous disadvantages of mobile phones such as social, medical and technical problems and the drawbacks of itself was outweigh the benefits one.
In detail, some people argue that the problems of cellular phones are significant. Firstly, as the result of spending too much time on mobile telephones, people might become addictive to social media and modern devices and lead to various eyes diseases such as short-sighted and astigmatism. For instance, nowadays more and more teenagers have to wear glasses because of their bad habits in spending time on modern devices. Secondly, social problems can associate with the use of mobile phones because many people may suffer from losing important details or even exposing private information saving in their mobile phones. It can be attributed to the lost of their phone or their unsecured protection. Another striking issue is resulted from the technical problems when their phones are broken or faulty.
On the other hand, despite its weakness, people can benefit a lot when they are using handphone. They can easily access to information without searching for it for hours in the library or other public places. Moreover, it is more convenient to relax themselves with various entertainment methods such as listening to music, reading e-books or chatting with friends.
In conclusion I suppose that there are many limitations in the use of mobile phones but it is not true to think that there are more problems than the benefits of using mobile phone.
- The bar chart shows the types of media that people of different age groups used to get daily news in one country in 2011 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 84
- ome people think that it is beneficial for students to go to private secondary schools but other think it has negative effects Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion 73
- The chart shows the hours per week spent watching TV by gender and by age group in 2001 in Australia Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant Write at least 150 words 52
- Some employers reward members of staff for their exceptional contribution to the company by giving them extra money This practice can act as an incentive for some but may also have a negative impact on others To what extent is this style of management eff 56
- There are social medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones What forms do they take Do you agree the problems of mobile phones outweigh the benefits 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 298, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outweighed'.
Suggestion: outweighed
...roblems and the drawbacks of itself was outweigh the benefits one. In detail, some pe...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18315018315 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61961365845 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556776556777 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7285661782 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.916666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365443354355 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136725283433 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112834774596 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244564712061 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102891635928 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.