There is no future for public transport because travelling by car is so much more convenient

Essay topics:

There is no future for public transport, because travelling by car is so much more convenient.

Public transportation was founded a long time ago, and people were using them a lot and now everyone owns a car, people stop using public transportation, and it became useless to them, and I think after 20 years public transportation will disappear.

Firstly, it takes a lot of time to arrive at your destination, for example, if you are going from Manama to Muharrq, it will stop at a different station and that will take 40 minutes instead of 20 minutes, so people now using their cars to save them more time, especially if there are late, they need to arrive as soon as possible, and not stop every five minutes. Moreover, there are limited stations for public transportation, and you can't go to the exact same place you want, you need to stop at the nearest station and then walk to it.

Secondly, it is crowded, and there are a lot of people in there, and sometimes you can't find a seat to sit in, and you have to stand up for a long time, and some people can't stand up for that long because of medical reasons, so that is why they prefer to use their own car.
Thirdly, there are limits on the time to the public transportation, and most of the companies work from 8 a.m. to 8p.m, and for the time between 9 p.m. to 7 a.m. people can't use the public transportation, and that makes them feel trapped, especially that nowadays there are a lot of things to do at night.

In conclusion, people prefer using their own cars instead of using public transportation for many reasons.

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 438, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ions for public transportation, and you cant go to the exact same place you want, yo...
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Line 7, column 84, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...t of people in there, and sometimes you cant find a seat to sit in, and you have to ...
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Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...and up for a long time, and some people cant stand up for that long because of medic...
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Line 8, column 170, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...he time between 9 p.m. to 7 a.m. people cant use the public transportation, and that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, for example, i think, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47619047619 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64924571617 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487179487179 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 12.0 0.809619238477 1482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.5801723547 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 203.666666667 106.682146367 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 45.5 20.7667163134 219% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.1666666667 7.06120827912 257% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186692902435 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109166507991 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04061495482 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121858324844 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340608536093 0.056905535591 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 13.0946893788 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.59 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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