"People should stop using their mobile phones when they are with other people."
People using their phones while they are with other people, it may be annoying sometimes when you are talking with someone, however I disagree with people who say that they have to stop using their phones, for several reason such as urgent things, research, and entertainment.
First of all, they may have to use their phones to do google search, for questation they have, and to look at the to the web to get more information.
Secondly, there are some situation that are urgent, and you have to use your phone, for example you have to check on someone who is in they hospital and see what he is doing, and remind him to take their medicine, or you have to check on your little sibling and see what are they doing, further more you someone else need your help in doing something, and now the best way to communicate with people is calling them, moreover sending them a message to their phones so, you need to keep your phone with you all the time and look in it every 5 minuts.
Thirdly, phones are kind of entertainment, and there is a lot of games and apps are enjoying, and in some situation you need to entertain your self, for instance you are with group and you think that your boring and there is no point that your their with group, and you will not affect what are they are chatting on it, or what they are doing so you use your phone to entertain your self, in additional sometimes the hole group using the phones to play a game to entertain them self because now the best entertainment is online game.
I think using phones with other people is annoying, however it is important to keep your phones and use it because now every things in this life in the phone and to see what is new in the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 211, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
...ey have to stop using their phones, for several reason such as urgent things, research, and en...
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Line 6, column 26, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'situations'?
Suggestion: situations
...formation. Secondly, there are some situation that are urgent, and you have to use yo...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... time and look in it every 5 minuts. Thirdly, phones are kind of entertainmen...
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Line 10, column 201, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
...e you are with group and you think that your boring and there is no point that your ...
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... best entertainment is online game. I think using phones with other people i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40809968847 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22644904252 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445482866044 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 10.0 0.809619238477 1235% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 20.2975951904 315% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 169.010532216 49.4020404114 342% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 283.0 106.682146367 265% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.2 20.7667163134 309% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 33.0 7.06120827912 467% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34597264752 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.24767137189 0.084324248473 294% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135282050799 0.0667982634062 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24767137189 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135282050799 0.056905535591 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.4 13.0946893788 240% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 31.9 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 11.3001002004 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.19 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.1190380762 273% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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