Change is always a good thing.’ Do you agree?
[6:37 pm, 25/05/2022] Zahraa Abdulrahim
we grow up, and everything around us changes, and we used to do things, but now all of its changes or disappears, and I think it is a good thing to change, because it will be boring if we are stuck on doing the same things, and at the end changing is succeeding.
First of all, technology has changed a lot, especially in the last 2 decades, and now everything depends on it, and it makes our life easier. Furthermore, one of the big changes is that everyone has more than one device, instead of each family having one device for all of them, and we always use our phones to do things, and one of the things that helped me a lot, and saves me more time is the electronic government, it is a website created by the government, and I can do a lot of things online at home, for example, renewing my passport, and paying for the bills, and it is really helpful, and I always use it instead of going there and wait for a long time.
Secondly, people’s thoughts change a lot, and now we become more open mind in a lot of things, for instance, girls now can go to university, and it become something normal in our life, despite people in the past, who were preventing girls from going to university and completing their education, and I think it is a good change because girls are needed in the work field and they are the half of the society.
In conclusion, change is a good thing, and that is what will help us move on and have a better world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
[6:37 pm, 25/05/2022] Zahraa Abdulrahim On our competitive world, people hold d...
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Line 5, column 609, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...e it to you, because of your hard work. Moreover your college on the work will help you,...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, for example, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.11805555556 5.12529762239 80% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09357436614 2.80592935109 75% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46875 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.0986913062 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.25 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 20.7667163134 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.75 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191357938895 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101119705725 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411653625585 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103397284698 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604021272916 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.32 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.21 12.4159519038 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.