There should be noise rules for people
People hold different views about whether people should follow strict laws about controlling the quantity of noise or not. It is a tought question because making noise has its advantages and disadvantages.
Frankly, I believe that there more pros rather than cons. Firstly, there are a lot of activities with making noise thanks to which one can feel free, relaxed, happy and calm. Moreover, in mostly it needs less money and brings more happiness. For instance, going to noisy birthday party will make dozens of depressed people a great deal happier than visiting a professional psychologist. Thirdly, nowadays people,especially in big cities, got used to living in noise and found many ways how to deal with it. In addition, scientists developed a lot of inventions that block noise, for example, acoustic walls.
On the other hand, noise can bring humans many troubles. First of all, it can cause illnesses such as deafness and headache. What is more, noise can disturb people who need to concentrate on their studying of work. Those ones can become stressful and depressed due to the lack of concentration on their dealings. Furthermore, sometimes people make noise in public places what causes many problems, for example, awaking of a baby or elderlies heart attack.
To sum up, strict laws to control noise has more minuses rather than pluses. But to manage this there is no need in laws because people can find ways to control their emotions and behave loudly only in special places and with people who do not need to focuse on their work. Even if there were strict laws, people who wanted to make noise would do it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, frankly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, to sum up, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91636363636 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57677869243 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603636363636 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6895229425 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25570086986 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792415751149 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643961955321 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16578888971 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418876128615 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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