These days, almost every individual wants to own a startup.
Many believe that this is the best time to live in while others are afraid of its repercussions.
Give your opinion.
People are more conscious about life settlement. Owing to the fact that, many people wants to be a self startup and they believe that this is a peak time. While, others thinking about the after effects of own projects. However, in my opinion, people who had the confidence and enthusiasm to build up an innovative works, they should go on, instead of, thinking about the impacts.
On the one hand, self confidence and self esteem must be needed for new steps and considered every minute would be crucial. Starting a new project with enough knowledge and power would lead to a successful entrepreneur or business man. During the young age, try to do some ingenious works irrespective of fear and anxiety often make fascinating results in many people lives. Energy must be boosted by self analysis, and proper corrections may likely to enhance ones own energy and will power to be successful. For instance, a business magnet in India Mr. Yousef ally, was the peddler at the starting period and the will power lead him to a top five capitalist in India. Moreover, those who had interested to built an ingenious works, they must calculate every second is precious and try to do their best in life time.
On the other hand, some defenders argued about the consequences of self startups in terms of fear, and doubts. Starting a project at the early period of life might be mitigate the actual outcome in order to, lack of experience and mistakes. It is true that, many people failed in the fact that, over conscious about the outcome and difficulties of follow up practices often diminish the value of new projects. Furthermore, the opposers of early startup depicts the impacts of money lose, fruitless effort may volatile to pass it on and that would be serious psychological issues in coming future. Such looser's might not re collect and refurbishments also pull back many people from the own startups.
On balance, in my perspective, which would be a good idea to follow a passion like a new startup works if the person have proper plan and commitments. In fact, irrelevant doubts and afraid of later impact may not be a good idea to carried out and that would lead to more failure.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'work'?
Suggestion: work
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'work'?
Suggestion: work
...ho had interested to built an ingenious works, they must calculate every second is pr...
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Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...is precious and try to do their best in life time. On the other hand, some defenders a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rthermore, the opposers of early startup depicts the impacts of money lose, fruit...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... re collect and refurbishments also pull back many people from the own startups. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, thus, while, for instance, in fact, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7889182058 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59270509874 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540897097625 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6877320436 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.764705882 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2941176471 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.17647058824 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131622220955 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447941009132 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543205210582 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808118394787 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484294086193 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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