These days many of us prefer to throw damaged thing away, whereas in the past people used to repair damaged items and keep them for a long time. Explain why you think this change has happened? What are the effects of this change in attitude?
In today's modern world, people are being increasingly accessible to all sorts of product at an affordable price. Therefore, there is a group of people who discard used or damaged things while in the past, people fix their belongings and continue using them. In this essay, I will discuss about the reason behind this phenomenon as well as the impacts of it.
To begin with, individuals throwing damaged things away is due to several factors. Initially, goods are now more easy to be accessed to by consumers. The technology has largely contributed to this trend with the introduction of online shopping. For instance, consumers from all over the world can buy almost everything with just a mobile phone, specifically via applications namely Shoppee or Tiki. Furthermore, the living standard of customers has improved. In other words, people now earn more money and as a result of this, they spend more money on shopping.
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In todays modern world, people are being...
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...enomenon as well as the impacts of it. To begin with, individuals throwing dama...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, as a result, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 771.0 1615.20841683 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 153.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03921568627 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77002377967 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.725490196078 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 506.74238477 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9584073816 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1111111111 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190578154621 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670726663946 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656732723994 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148932494494 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041237135662 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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