Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
To begin with, not only on some countries but in the whole world, advertising is becoming more influential to sell their product, they are able to read the people’s changing perception and their increasing desire and target the every level of people by their marketing strategy. They are investing huge amount on famous faces and celebrity only to play some minutes role on their advertising. For example, every people want to follow the step of their idle person and look like same, hence, consumers believe more and pay for the same product to be same if it is not even necessary to them. Moreover, especially famous celebrity are used in clothing brand and beauty product to look beautiful , because women give concern more on their beauty. Furthermore, many advertise reflect the positive side of the product and ignore their side effect, which can mislead the consumers to buy the products. However, consumers are also becoming less rational, they make decision on spending luxuries life and to show off to the society, which lead them to buy more unnecessary things without comparing their side effect.
Secondly, people are having more busy life than before, they do not have more time to visit market. Some groups of consumers are fully depend on marketing and advertising of goods and services. So, by the advertisement they know about the new product and services and can compare their features. Another, merit of having more advertisement is, company become more focused on quality and price to compete in the market, which helps to get the quality product in reasonable price, however, it also make the consumers more rational, so they cannot mislead the consumers.
In conclusion, advertising is becoming moiré powerful and necessities to provide information of different product and services. There are both advantage and disadvantage of having more advertisement , but consumers has to become more rational to select their needed items.
- Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things Other people think that advertising is so common that we are no longer pay attention to it Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 61
- Fossil fuel such as coal oil and natural gas is extensively used in many countries which cause harms to the environment The use of alternative sources of energy including wind and solar power however is being encouraged in many countries Is this a positiv 73
- In the modern world the image photograph or film is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Unemployment remains the biggest challenge to school leavers in most countries How far do you agree with this assessment What other challenges face young people today 84
- Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time This can benefit teenagers and the community as well To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17350157729 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66301263328 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542586750789 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.9042719761 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.666666667 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4166666667 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134226188961 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624602781229 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353670847978 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105510784452 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185037721866 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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