Today many countries import food from different parts of the world. Is this a positive or negative development?
In a globalized world, it is common practice for countries to purchase food from other regions. From my viewpoint, I believe while this tendency is beneficial to a certain extent, it results in more negative effects.
On the one hand, food imports can lead to several benefits. From the consumers’ perspective, imported food can diversify their range of choices other than locally sourced items. Furthermore, buyers can get access to high-grade products from exporters located in developed countries. These manufacturers seem to be equipped with cutting-edge production lines, ensuring the superior quality of outputs. On a macroeconomic level, imports can allow countries to maintain the provision of particular food types for their citizens. In fact, there seems no longer homesteading nation, instead, every country has a certain level of dependence on others. For instance, while Vietnam has been considered one of the world’s largest rice exporters, the country has to purchase tons of dairy products from Australia, New Zealand to satisfy its domestic demand.
On the other hand, importing food can lead to some downsides. Firstly, not all residents can gain benefits from such items. Indeed, due to plenty of additional charges levied on imported products, such as shipping freight, customs duties and other logistical fees, their prices are often beyond most buyers’ means. Hence, these products can solely serve a specific segment of consumers. Another demerit worth mentioning is that importers would descend into unexpected food scarcity if they were heavily reliant on their overseas providers. In case exporters are subject to unpredictable events, such as climatic extremes or infectious diseases , all quantities of goods for exports would be cut off suddenly, which could leave their importing partners struggling to deal with potential food crises.
In conclusion, a nation can capitalize on importing food from others for the sake of its residents. However, It is my firm conviction that not every country-dweller can reap benefits from it and excessive reliance on foreign sellers may force an importing country into food insecurity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, well, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36144578313 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73908978697 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605421686747 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 332.0 20.2975951904 1636% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1780.0 106.682146367 1669% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 332.0 20.7667163134 1599% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 142.0 7.06120827912 2011% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257171652078 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.257171652078 0.084324248473 305% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180422205041 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485769257664 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 169.8 13.0946893788 1297% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -273.96 50.2224549098 -545% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 134.0 11.3001002004 1186% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.29 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 25.29 8.58950901804 294% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 134.8 10.1190380762 1332% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 57.0 10.7795591182 529% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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