Many people say that the only way to guarantee getting a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work.
How far do you agree or disagree with this above views?
Nowadays, our societies split in two ways in seeing to deal with working world. Some people believe in completing courses in a college will assure a valuable job despite need some time. While others say to have numerous experiences after finishing school and look for a job by head start. I personally believe on the former postulate since a higher education is able to alleviate the opportunity to get an excellent profession.
It is apparent that the competitiveness of work field become more insane. While the demand of a qualified laborer step-up as time goes by. However, the higher education like colleges that serve bachelor, master and doctoral degrees become a solution because they patronize students to specialize a particular study and besides that also improving their soft skills. Taken as an example, engineering course have been expanding their concern not just in theory but also in practice, it can be seen on students that take the course that represent an excellent knowledge, team work, and the capacity in solving problems.
Other factions consider to take a job following their study in school. There are several examples of people without a degree achievement succeed in developing their business although they should initially struggle much more. Majority of their business is not success in one go but they undergo unpleasant obstacles and take critical risks, and finally who stand in the end is whom will be the winner. But this occasion in one in million cases, because without a proper knowledge and the capability to look for the opportunity to become success, the chances will disappear.
To sum up, to have a proper job depend on individuals that will experience. Yet, having a qualified certificate from campus will be more guaranteed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 74, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eness of work field become more insane. While the demand of a qualified laborer step-...
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Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider taking'.
Suggestion: consider taking
...ty in solving problems. Other factions consider to take a job following their study in school. ...
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Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...the winner. But this occasion in one in million cases, because without a proper knowled...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, however, if, look, so, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12068965517 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76086331257 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61724137931 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2804214505 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.071428571 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172931200031 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583530261304 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578217037627 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100022758349 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0946645727938 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.