Today's government struggles to create enough housing for increasing populations while protecting the environment. Give your opinion.
The government has a hard time to make shelter to match with the growth of population. The Government also faces difficulties to protect the environment
simultaneously. The elobatration of challenges faced by government shall be discussed below.
Every government of a country has huge responsibities on them. Massive aspects must be considered to sustain longevity and success. The government is burdened with
numerous tasks. Making housing available for everyone in the country can be problematic. To provide shelter for everyone more area would be required. The government
must balance the nature of environemnt simultaneously. Initiatives must be promoted to provide enough shelter and protect the environment. Government has the
authority to bring in attractive schemes suitable for both.
In the over populated countries these initiatives must be taken at the earliest. Such promotion helps in creating awareness amongst the people. As the government has
access to everyone it can create such alert schemes with environment The government can provide more employment to residents by various means. With there being an demand
of more shelter than before the number in job employment can also rise. These strategic plans can help the local citizens in obtaining a place of their own simultaneously
earn extra.
- Today s government struggles to create enough housing for increasing populations while protecting the environment Give your opinion 56
- mother plays a better role in bringing up children rather than father do you agree or disagree 49
- Some believe that government should take care of retirees while others think everyone should save for their own retirement 73
- EXTREME OR ADVENTURE SPORTS DISCUSS ITS ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES 77
- Some people think its better to live with a roommate Other people prefer to live alone Which do you prefer Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rotect the environment simultaneously. The elobatration of challenges faced by gov...
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... creating awareness amongst the people. As the government has access to everyone ...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ents by various means. With there being an demand of more shelter than before the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ning a place of their own simultaneously earn extra.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...heir own simultaneously earn extra.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 202.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62376237624 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14067458976 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574257425743 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1387523612 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.0 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.625 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 7.06120827912 11% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17790703122 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628804750655 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458930204886 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792331750076 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411590859456 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.43 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.