In today’s times, the internet is making it easy to study online from home. Some prefer online courses to study and they think it is better. Others prefer classroom education.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this era, sophisticated technology brings many benefits to our education method. Many people believe that online learning is the best way for their children due to the pandemic era. Meanwhile, others choose offline learning as the main option. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and give my opinion.
On the one hand, those who support e-learning cite the various benefits to children. These range from flexibility of time and affordable tuition fees, it offers the opportunity to attend the class according to their wishes at any time and to study anywhere in the world. If we compare it to a conventional class, learning from home, using the internet, is more competitive and convenient than offline class because they can access the open sources easily through their devices. Moreover, the outbreak of coronavirus in the early of 2020 in Indonesia demanded people to change their way of accessing class. Online classes make the virus not spread to others since they do not have to have physical contact; the coronavirus cannot transmit to minors. As a result, parents are able to supervise and feel at ease with them carefully since their children are in their sight.
In contrast, opponents of this view point out that classroom training is the perfect place. Learning from class builds up the social development of the learners. They directly meet their peers and pedagogical experts in the class. By doing so, students can ask about the topic they are struggling with or participate in many activities with their friends such as group discussion or debate activities, but also they can study under the supervision of the teacher. The situation where students and teachers change the role of leading an activity in the class could be categorized as a combination of teacher-led lessons and student-led lessons that will efficiently assimilate knowledge from them.
To sum up, it seems advisable that the decision to take offline learning is the best method to increase academic achievement from the minors, rather than on a general view that distance learning should be taken by children if the number of covid-19 decreases. It would appear that classroom learning is more beneficial than internet-based learning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, in contrast, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13896457766 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73181656774 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58583106267 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3006562522 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.941176471 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5882352941 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.70588235294 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165685552279 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498233206915 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383476909611 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932018939965 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245024696084 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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