Today, TV channels provide man’s sport shows more than women’s sports shows, why? Should TC channel give equal time for women’s sport and men’s sport?
Nowadays, man’s sports dominate the amount of time recorded on TV. From my viewpoint, the reason is that most watchers are men and this problem should be resolved to give equality for women.
Obviously, men spend most of their time after work to lay on the coaches and watching TV while women are always busy with housework and taking care of children. Moreover, women usually prefer calling their friends, talking for long hours rather than watching sports so female viewers become scarcer. As viewers are not sufficient to meet the requirements of TV stations, they can not broadcast women’s sports regularly because they may lose a huge sum of money. Thus, the fewer viewers, the less development in women’s sports.
Nevertheless, everyone should pay an equal time for both genders as women deserve to receive more care. In the modern world, gender is equal so there is no reason for the undevelopment of women’s sports. Many talented people are buried because of this reason. Hence, everyone should put the immediate benefits aside to give the opportunities for women and in the future, they may become as popular as men’s sport, which gives people the same joy and relaxed moments. Not only that, this action can create more jobs for unemployed people, enhancing the world’s economy.
In conclusion, less care is the main reason for the unpopular in women’s shows and people should treat them more equally. Therefore, governments should invest money in training the girls so that they can compete with the boys fairly in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08171206226 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49887861116 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603112840467 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4169161907 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.461538462 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368348440191 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12292081309 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073129532257 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226648786583 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643554171699 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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