In todays modern society more and more people are becoming obese.
What are the causes of obesity?
And what can be done to control this common problem?
It is true that the obesity among population is increasing in recent years. There are several reasons why this trend happening, but variety of measures can be taken to adress this issue.
There are two main factors which lead overweight among the larger proportion of people recently. Firstly, individuals gain more weight because of the sedentary lifestyle which is brought by the modern technology. For example, people do not exert themselves as they used to be because of the computers. They tend to spend most of their time surfing the internet specially in social media, playing games or watching videos. Secondly, consumption of fast or junk food be the other culprit for becoming obese. These food such as burgers, chips or pizzas contains high calaries which causes the increased fat deposits, and eventually overweight and obesity.
Several measures can be implemented to solve this issue on individual basis, and by the government level in larger scale. Increase the intake of more healthy meals which contain low calaries, and high nutritional contents like greener vegetables and fruits instead of food which consist of refined sugar and starch such as cakes and pastries will be beneficial to a well balanced life. A person can also engage in a regular physical activity, for instance, brisk walking or swimming to maintain optimum weight. Furthermore, government can arrange some activities and facilities to make the population keep-fit and healthy by facilitating the infrastructure. These can be building a gym or a park for people to workout, and a regular breaks for office employees to exert thethemselves during working hours.
While there are some clear reasons for the increasing number of obese people in the society these days, several steps should be taken to tackle the problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 506, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'These foods'?
Suggestion: This food; These foods
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Line 4, column 45, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ral measures can be implemented to solve this issue on individual basis, and by t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in fact, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23024054983 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72435562642 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615120274914 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8025145067 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.714285714 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21019207431 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653345464077 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412973212738 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132689521207 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235645370615 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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