In today's world of advanced science and technology, we still greatly value our artists such as musicians, painters and writers. What can arts tell us about life that science and technology cannot?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Undeniably, when the world is developing faster and faster in industrialization, science and technology have benefitted the whole world in a variety of aspects. however, the value of art has never forgotten due to its vital contribution to human life especially in spirit.
there are a plethora of advantages that only art can bring about that science and technology fail to do. Regarding human growth, art has succeeded in nurturing our spirit. human emotion is affected a lot by art such as music, painting, photo which are be able to comfort and satisfy their feeling magically. For instant, listening to your favorite album before going to bed can improve your sleep and dreams or starting a day with some exciting songs will boost your whole-day temper immediately. Moreover, not only technology is possible to widen human knowledge, so was art. many experiments proved that classical music such as Beethoven’s or Mozart’s, plays an important role in babies’ IQ rate since they have been in fetus naturally. Another examples, nowadays, more and more people have been agreed that listening to the foreign radios or songs is the most effective way to learn new languages. they said that it is much more interesting to learn with a little of beat, a little of rhythm instead of abundance of lessons in theory and computers work like robots dully.
Extensively, art has been contributing to form a country’s culture and history for long time ago, even much earlier than science. A majority of nations present their history through prehistoric photos and paintings, which are the most trustful evidences when science and technology haven’t applied widely. culturally, clothes, languages, foods, traditional songs perfectly describe our culture that are specialist of that country, attracting foreign tourists. For example, Vietnamese ao dai, Korean hanbook, Japanese kimono.
To conclude, there is no denying the fact that science and technology have great value in our life. however, artists can teach people about many aspects of their life that the former cannot.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35240963855 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.932298144 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611445783133 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0090976949 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0625 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220029491857 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716401582815 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620176057318 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149353010034 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672136019587 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.