Topic 06/04/19: People have little understanding of the importance of the natural world. What are the reasons for this, and how can people learn more about the natural world?
It is undeniable that people have less knowledge and sympathy towards the environment, which has led to severe pollution and the extinction of several species. The causes for this phenomenon can be identified and there are actions worth taking to increase individuals’ understanding of nature.
Human beings have become ignorant about the natural world because of their own selfish nature and short-term vision. They are only capable of looking after themselves and those in their social circles. Besides, humans consider wealth one of the most important aspects of their daily lives, because without monetary values, their basic needs cannot be met. For example, many developed countries opted for economic progress instead of environment conservation since the former creates foods and housing. Thus, the world thrives socially and economically at the expense of nature being neglected and destroyed.
Nevertheless, solutions to tackle this problem exist. Firstly, it is easier to start from the educational roots. This means schools should try to raise awareness of children about protecting the environment through biology and geography lessons. Additionally, students’ can gain hands-on experience by partaking in field trips and nature-related projects. Second of all, it is recommended that strict laws about nature preservation be imposed and whoever violates by poaching and polluting must be severely punished. Moreover, more national budgets could be spent on parks and reserves for endangered flora and fauna. Finally, companies, who hold great financial power, need to pioneer in clean manufacturing process and environmentally-friendly goods to be a model for their consumers. In these ways, human kind stands better chance of re-learning about their surrounding and protecting it.
To sum up, though the environment has suffered due to human actions, it is still possible for people to make changes to compensate for nature’s sacrifice. This requires the cooperation of individuals, government and businesses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, still, thus, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73927392739 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11308080485 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686468646865 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6993404221 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.294117647 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254606195693 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684059838978 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054742099657 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144054402987 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0108308443064 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.