Topic: People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
In the modern world, the number of problems that people in big cities need to deal with everyday has increased significantly. This essay will discuss two major problems, which are pollution and unemployment. These issues are the reasons why governments should encourage people to emigrate from the large cities to towns.
It is true that the more developed the cities are these days, the more pollution people have to bear. Due to the high volumes of traffic, the quantity of exhaust which is released into the air has become factors negatively affecting the environment. The fresh air is getting altered by these pollutants, resulting in various serious diseases related to respiratory. Particularly, if people have breathed and absorbed carbon dioxide, such as vehicle exhaust and factory fumes, for a long time, their lungs would have been damaged. As a result, they are in danger of getting lung cancer which can lead to fatality.
Besides, people who live in the urban areas have to cope with the lack of job opportunities due to the overpopulation occurring in these cities. The development of businesses in large cities is currently attracting people from rural areas because they think that it is an ideal opportunity to seek a job. However, since a lot of people share the same mindset, the number of people moving to cities is growing, which leads to the imbalance in working demand and supply. Therefore, there are many young people not being able to earn a living.
From my perspective, because of the consequences of these two problems, it is necessary for governments to encourage people to move out from the urban areas to the regional towns. By doing this, they can have a chance to experience a better life in a fresh atmosphere in order to improve their health. Moreover, thanks to this emigration, the job opportunities have been approached by more people.
In conclusion, air pollution and unemployment are considered two main issues that people living in metropolises have to suffer and they are mostly because of overpopulation. Hence, reduction in population in big cities by encouraging people to move to the countryside should be the solution that governments concern.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: every day
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, as to, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09392265193 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88600402992 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519337016575 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2687494292 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.470588235 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2941176471 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323259521497 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992656615339 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818404331165 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185999513528 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655759657551 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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