Tourism is considered a main source of income of many nations in the world. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweight its drawbacks?
In the developing world, tourism is regarded as an important foundation of profits of many countries. Conversely, tourism may bring shortcoming if it is not handled appropriately. I believe that this issue brings more benefits than its drawbacks.
The greatest advantage is that tourism provides income to help countries develop in many aspects. To illustrate, tourism raises people’s awareness about culture throughout the world and also helps to preserve the traditions and society. Money gained from tourism can be used to improve the infrastructure and facilities in nations. Furthermore, tourism creates employment for people as well. It is one of the most popular major that students follow to study in these days. From that point, many countries can build up and improve relations among them by several ways such as organizing some cooperation programs for students to have chances to study abroad.
On the contrary, this issue may bring about some disadvantages if we do not deal with it properly.
One of the negative impacts of tourism is damaging to the environment. More litter are left on the streets, more pollution are caused from the congestion, some tourist attractions are being downgraded. To take for instance some modern cities like Cape Town in South Africa, it has more than thousands tourists a month. However, some places in this city that visitors do not prefer to be there because the occurence of criminality is considerably high.
In conclusion, the income of tourism provides both pros and cons. Nevertheless, the government of nations had better manage carefully and appropriately so that they can develop and improve their countries completely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34456928839 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96948717574 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614232209738 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.718285888 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1875 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274029617515 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880552967505 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642632086534 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131818870618 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613852277553 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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