Tourism is encouraged in many countries. Does tourism bring more advantages or disadvantages to a country?
Many countries around the world encourage tourism and travellers. In this essay, I will discuss the positive and negative sides of this trend. Firstly, I will explore the advantages of tourism and secondly, I will discuss the disadvantages that come with tourism.
One of the benefits of tourism is its positive effect on the economy. There are lots of businesses that earn their income through tourists, emploees of this businesses and smaller self-employed people as well. For example, when people are travelling, they spend money on accommodation, food, transport and often buy some souvenirs to bring back home. Also, while governments trying to improve tourism, they build new infrastructures and facilities such as new roads, trails, beaches and public restrooms. These facilities are helpful to travellers as well as the locals. Furthermore, travelling helps people experience different and foreign cultures. This can help them learn and understand the lives of others hence, tourism would connect humans at a different level.
One the other hand, one of the downsides of tourism is that some countries depend on tourism as their biggest income source. If a place earns their money mostly from tourism, it gets difficult when tourist stop visiting. For example, the economies of holiday paradises like Thailand and Maldives effected heavily from Covid19 (travelling was banned worldwide). Moreover, some tourists are acting disrespectful and inconsiderate while enjoying themselves. For example, they don't show respect to local culture and customs or litter the environment.
In conclusion, we can see there are many advantages and disadvantages of tourism.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53125 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91811255084 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62109375 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9255509887 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.5 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303169939944 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975531012004 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128301616548 0.0667982634062 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216267265042 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102788129029 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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