Tourism is encouraged in many countries. Does tourism bring more advantages or disadvantages to a country.
In the era of globalisation, it is seen that many countries are stepping ahead to promote culture of tourism. Huge amount of investments are being encouraged to increase the flow of visitors in order to heighten the foreign currency exchange and to enhance job opportunities to masses especially in developing countries. Although, tourism is becoming a popular industry at international grounds, its seasonal dependency and other negative factors can not be overlooked. This essay will emphasize on both positive and negative aspect of this industry.
Tourism, which is emerging as a successful revenue resource, has numerous benefits on service and economic sector of a country. Many interlinked services such as airline, surface transportation, food industry and many more acquire large scale benefits with extension of tourist business. Moreover, it leads to economic growth by raising GDP of a nation. Tourism gives rise to many employment opportunities especially to local communities that helps in raising their income structure. For instance, local people boost their income by advertising cultural products and presenting local dances to the visitors. In addition, profits generated are later invested on improving the infrastructure of tourist areas. Hence, tourism plays a vital role to enhancing global status of a country.
On the other hand, there are various scenarios which can not be ignored in context of tourism. Being seasonal, it is not regarded as a stable source of income, as it mainly depends on holidays and weather conditions of respective destination. Also, it leads to many criminal activities, which can disrupt the peace and harmony of any nation. Moreover, rise in prices of local products adversely effects the livelihood of local people. In addition, increase in number of visitors results in heavy traffic jams that leads to severe road congestion. For example, every year, in summer season rate of flights, hotels and local products gets skyrocketed due to surge in number of visitors. So, drawbacks that are associated with tourism are worth grabbing one's attention.
To conclude, tourism is earning a lot of global attention. Its contribution towards nation's growth is commendable, despite few down points. While few are concerned about its growing impact on local bodies, others appreciate its role in overall future prospects. So, I believe that the favours and benefits linked with tourism outweighs the disadvantages associated to it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, look, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2101.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47135416667 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95919400442 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580729166667 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 668.7 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6103756 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04545454545 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212419364595 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563480648463 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066720465674 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117291400471 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360139629922 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 78.4519038076 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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