Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result people gravitate towards buying their products What problems does this cause What could be done to encourage people to buy local products
needs
life style status
In recent years the advertisement of big companies and influence to the people to use their brands has been gaining a great deal of attention throughout the world. Most importantly, this issue has been a bone of contention among the critics.
I believe that 2 of the main cause of marketing influence of people is identifying the needs, wants and demands of people and secondly, to create a lifestyle status for the people by the big companies through their products. Fortunately, there are effective solutions to these challenges.
Admittedly, the predominant cause are peoples needs and their buying behavior. The big business companies can detect the wants and demands of the people and throughout their marketing campaigns, they envision their idea into the customer to manipulate the buying decision from converting their want into the immediate needs. For instance: People who have a need to buy coffee from their local produce they go for some imported brands instead of buying local one due to the influence of the advert.
Probably, the second most important factor behind this issue is big companies influence people to use their brand as a symbol of status and lifestyle. for instance: Using iPhone by people gave them a secure thoughts of idea as it gives them social status and way of lifestyle
What happens is due to the fact that the influence of advert and marketing campaign by the big companies, the local produces that have similar feature and benefits to the big company products, fall behind in the competition and a country as a whole loss from a great sum of financial gain.
When dealing with the first problem, the effective way to work it out with the repercussion would be, promoting the local products and educate and create awareness for using the local produce as it boosts the economy of the country. People needs to be educated by the state of government that if their needs become fulfilled with the local products, they need not to go for the demand in order to be feel fulfilled. For instance: Promoting local garments and using local products reduce the influence of big companies
In reaction to the second issue, people have to understand the status and lifestyle of choice doesn't depends on the exterior factor but it depends on the human behavior itself. If they can become asset of the society by self development and playing a role to development of the once countries economy. That gives them a status. For instance creating an opportunity to become local entrepreneur and produce local gadgets that fulfills the local needs would be a great start.
I personally believe in future to redress the balance of buying behavior and influence of the people by big companies marketing advert and budget, local government should also give some more flexibility of getting loans and financial support to the local producers so that they can withstand the pressure of the marketing competition
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 41.998997996 174% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2488.0 1615.20841683 154% => OK
No of words: 495.0 315.596192385 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02626262626 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65365666286 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.434343434343 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 761.4 506.74238477 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.125463534 49.4020404114 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 155.5 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.9375 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345201756308 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116350401925 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748013020484 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158741197001 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670568655416 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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