Tourism has increased so much over the last 50 years that it is having a mainly negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment. However, others claim that it is good for the economy.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give your own opinion.
Every holiday season, we see a multitude of the mass using their savings to journey to low-cost developing countries. The question is, does tourism impact the environment adversely, or are the economic benefits worth over looking any negativities? In this essay, I will discuss both the pros and cons of tourism, supporting my view of the former argument.
With the influx of vacationers, comes the need for temporary accommodations in the form of motels, high-rise hotels, rental rooms and the likes. This leads to an increase in employment, as in those days there is a demand for hotel staff, which includes but is not limited to receptionists, clerks, cooks and cleaning personnel. Sales of various good and services, such as souvenirs stores, street food stands or transport services, benefit monetarily and with them, federal tax reserves. Despite all this, after this, destination towns are left empty for the rest of the year.
The disadvantages are not far and few, unfortunately. I believe, most drawbacks mentioned below are long lasting. Firstly, the pollution that occurs is far too great to go unnoticed; noise that comes with overcrowding, waste that comes with infrastructures not designed for such activities and the air pollution with the aeroplanes that journey to and from the destination country. Furthermore, this polluting of the environment continues with the ever-more destruction of green spaces and historical sites in favour of high-rise malls and hotels, specifically to promote tourism. The damage does not end here, and many a times, due to the lack of preservation, historical sites are left vandalised with litter.
In conclusion, despite the economic benefit, the improvement is only seasonal. Whereas, the environmental harm is long lasting and in my opinion outweighs the advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: overlooking
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: a time; times
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, so, whereas, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36933797909 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06560811478 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623693379791 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.548877179 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.071428571 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129471345682 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408181101343 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462285185981 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0714171603912 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457728435816 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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