Tourism has increased so much over the last 50 years that it is having a mainly negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment. However, others claim that it is good for the economy.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give your own opinion.
It can not be denied that tourism plays an essential role in the majority of the economy. Over a period of 50 years, tourism has brought negative impacts to the environment despite the development of the economy. In this essay, I will illustrate both benefits and drawbacks of the tourism industry.
The first thing I would like to mention is the advantage that tourism has brought to some countries. These days, the tourism industry in some of the countries is considered to have been contributed and boosted the economy by attracting investments and contracts, which means tourism has successfully brought the profits-a huge amount of money. For example, a country can benefit and manufacture products from its own natural resources; however, support from other countries is necessary to reinforce the position on the market. Therefore, tourism is an indirect way that investors can travel to various regions to find the potential in order to cooperate.
On the other hand, tourism of course has many negative impacts on the environment. As a result of the massive development, the number of visitors and tourists keeps increasing every year. Nevertheless, this expansion has led to pollution because of the lack of awareness of many people. For instance, it had been reported that many beaches these days are losing their beauty due to a large amount of garbage left after every high season. Additionally, many precious statues or carvings or caves had been vandalized seriously because many impolite tourists said that they wanted to bring back something as a souvenir, which results in the action of scarping.
To sum up, the tourism industry not only brings positive but also negative impacts on a country. Although it has brought benefits to the economy, the serious damage that it caused on the environment also affects the local people, and in the near future, the pollution can lead to economic stagnation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, for instance, of course, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14012738854 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77794645203 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566878980892 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3619662561 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.285714286 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229410431411 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817496677593 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684211085722 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133989000541 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433122547896 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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