The tradition that the family gets together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons? What are the impacts?
In modern life, some people have lost the habit of eating meals with their families. this phenomenon which are attributed for some reasons, have negative influences on individual families.
there are some reasons leading to this changing pattern of behaviour. The first reason is that people tend to share mealtimes with other relationships. Young people, for instance, are likely to immerse themselves in satisfaction with their friends or lovers in restaurants for varying diet rather than eating the same meals everyday, which inevitably becomes tedious and no longer stimulate taste buds. secondly, for some people who entirely devote their time on pursuing their jobs to move up the career ladder, family is not their top-priority. For example, some parents allow their offspring to have their meal in front of TV or sitting in front of the computer since they have to concentrate on their works.
it is apparent that this problem could pose a threat to family. Firstly, it contributes to weakening family bonds. there would have arguments and conflicts between parents and children that results from the lack of mealtimes which enable people to share news, give guidance and to make plans together. secondly, family members are prone to some health risks. For instance, elderly people who usually experience feelings of loneliness and isolation in mealtimes tend to have higher risks of some mental health problems. In addition, children who are likely to have snacks or to eat junk food at fast food chains due to the absence of family meal will suffer from health consequences such as obesity and hyperactivity.
In conclusion, some causes for this trend which could impact negatively on family can be identified.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22661870504 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63050989729 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579136690647 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4488718762 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.785714286 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103328325067 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423036786972 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321791027926 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0699020168401 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00977199524409 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.