Unemployment is a growing problem all over the world. What are the causes of this ? What could be done to help tackle this issue?
Recent decades have witnessed a remarkable increase in an unemployment rate especially in younger generations. Given that this trend could lead to a whole host of issues for the development of society, identifying the reasons behind this trend is the key to finding the solutions.
There are a myriad of reasons why an unemployment rate is growing. First, Due to the deficiency in practical skills such as communication and team-working , individuals could not gratify the job specification.Subsequently , the likelihood of these people’s dismissal is inevitable, increasing the frictional unemployment proportions. Second, An increasing trend in automation in factories acts an contributor to the redundancy of blue-collar workers. In fact,the applications of machines with artificial intelligence have culminated in the replacement of manual jobs in many American factories,leading to the mass unemployment in laborers nationwide.
However, the official authorities should undertake some urgent initiatives to mitigate the problem. First, Some post-secondary institutions should offer some professional training courses for the low-income individuals without tuition fees. This would be conducive to their opportunities to experience a progressive and standardised academic learning environment, promoting their career prospects with better social status. Another measure is that the local government should incentivise some outsourcing investments from the multinational corporations. These financial operations are invariably associated with the construction of many highly-industrial parks with manufacturing factories, creating many job opportunities for the local citizens.
In conclusion, The job specification and competitive employment market are the two contributing factors to unemployment. Some outside investments and professional courses should be corporated to minimise this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.44747081712 5.12529762239 126% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.88364404586 2.80592935109 138% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618677042802 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1262869667 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.461538462 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130969547322 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442939046357 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532944969805 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888034581451 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432771311322 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.35 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 20.13 12.4159519038 162% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.97 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.