Unemployment is a growing problem all over the world. What are the causes of this ? What could be done to help tackle this issue?
Recent decades have witnessed a remarkable increase in an unemployment rate especially in younger generations. Given that this trend could lead to a whole host of issues for the development of society, identifying the reasons behind this trend is the key to finding the solutions.
There are a myriad of reasons why an unemployment rate is growing. First, Due to the lack of practical skills, individuals could not gratify the job specification. For example, some job seekers are not equipped with communication and teamworking skills and subsequently can not handle the working pressure, which forces them to leave the job. Second, an increase in individuals with high qualifications could act as an incentive for the higher degree of competitive employment market. This means that the people who do not attend educational institutions would have no opportunity to land in a suitable occupation, culminating a rise in an employment rate.
However, the official authorities should undertake some urgent initiatives to mitigate the problem. First, Some post-secondary institutions should offer some professional training courses for the low-income individuals without tuition fees. This would be conducive to their opportunities to experience a progressive and standardised academic learning environment, promoting their career prospects with better social status. Another measure is that, The local government should incentivise some outsourcing investments from the multinational corporations. These financial operations are invariably associated with the construction of many highly-industrial parks with manufacturing factories, create many job opportunities for the local citizens.
In conclusion, The job specification and competitive employment market are the two contributing factors to unemployment. Some outside investments and professional courses should be corporated to minimise this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.04411764706 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49999227631 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606617647059 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4451980519 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.428571429 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125234678291 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442232506504 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514281667374 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906021661917 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418484174611 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.75 12.4159519038 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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