Since modernization shopping mall has become the center of a town. Although this is the place to get essential things, young people are these days spending a myriad of time there without any particular need for buying goods. I believe this trend not only wasting the young generation’s valuable time but also destroying their creativity, which undoubtedly a degrading situation for society.
First and foremost, in this competitive era where getting employment requires higher grades, studying plenty of time is indispensable for every student. If instead of doing that someone spent time roaming at malls to be updated about what new things have arrived, merely it would bring any benefit to them. Nevertheless, these places are becoming more congested as more youngest are choosing this place to spend their leisure time. As a whole, this phenomenon deteriorating a society.
Furthermore, passing times at malls is also a pressing problem that causing a dispute between the young and their parents. To clarify, now and then new technology and gadgets are releasing in the market with a skyrocketing price, which might not be affordable for some parents. In some cases, the nescience child either shows imprudent demeanor, or some become depressive as they deprive of material gratification. If they continue preferring mall visiting as a pass time activity, they will lack empirical evaluation and creativity. This is because they will probably have a limited area to acknowledge the real world.
To recapitulate, although going shopping mall for necessity is essential, no one should make it a hobby. In my view, as a pastime activity going markets is making the young generation indolent, materialized, and on top of that killing their precious time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since modernization shopping mall has become ...
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Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'youngest' (without 'more') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: youngest
...e places are becoming more congested as more youngest are choosing this place to spend their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, then, in my view, in some cases, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30714285714 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9181959062 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646428571429 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6315887417 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.142857143 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244858253611 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788001460477 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486273660582 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144703310115 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455698467534 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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