Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that every courses in universities should accept equal proportion of both genders. While it is true that having male and female students in every university subject is necessary, I disagree with the idea that the number of every gender should be equal.
To begin with, there are several reasons why the universities should permit male and female for all fields. Firstly, due to human rights, both genders could be permitted to study on their favorite subject. Therefore, students can take a big step in pursuit of their dreams and achieve success easily. If they are not accepted to their interested majors just because of gender, they might give up learning and lost faith in life. Secondly, since every classroom has both of male and female students like a miniature society, both sexes can increase their communication skills and level of competition from opposite gender. This helps them to develop comprehensively.
However, I believe that having the same number of men and women in all degree courses is simple unrealistic. First, because many courses are more popular with one gender than the other, the universities can not have equal numbers of applicants from both genders. For example, nursing courses tend to attract more female applicants, it is impossible to fill these courses if fifty percent of the places needed to go to males. Additionally, universities select the best candidates for each course according to their qualifications, which leads to the same opportunities for men and women. As a result, the applicants will be successful when they work hard to achieve good grade at school. If a female student is the best candidate for a place on a course, it would be wrong to reject her in favour of a male student having lower grades.
In conclusion, while it is necessary to have both genders in every university subjects, I disagree with the idea that every subject must have fifty percent of students each gender.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02147239264 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71837472448 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542944785276 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4286979524 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.133333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320105405729 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110857184457 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12276130957 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247086537792 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154898682115 0.056905535591 272% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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