University education should be free to everyone, regardless of income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that higher education should be free for all members of society. While there are some strong arguments against this view, I still believe that a non-profit university education system can be significantly beneficial for a country and its economy.
On the one hand, there are various reasons why we should pay for university institutions. Firstly, there are many expenses that tertiary education must cover such as infrastructure, electricity, employee wages, which are fundamental to maintain any school. A university can only create brilliant students if it is well-funded because it can concentrate all of its resources for teaching and upgrading the curriculum. Secondly, if higher education is free to everyone, it can become a burden on the government while citizens have to pay more taxes. Finally, undergraduate students may take university for granted as they do not have to pay any expenses, which can lead to overload in one class and a lack of motivation for learning.
On the other hand, university tuition should be free as it could bring far more benefits for society. One of the positives of doing this is that it provides equal opportunities for everyone willing to attend higher education. This will result in a well-educated workforce and in turn a productive and prosperous nation. In addition, for those students who come from a poor family but have a good performance at school, a free university education system can help them to completely concentrate on the class. For example, in some developing countries such as Vietnam, the amount of poor students with a strong will to learn is very high, therefore to make sure that we do not leave out any talents, a free education system is in need.
In conclusion, although a free university education could bring certain drawbacks, I believe that the benefits outweigh them in the long term.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10355987055 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97912568186 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53074433657 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7144086938 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.307692308 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2307692308 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213053070997 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882441125691 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446732754181 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144560920453 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337286360027 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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